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Tales of Allara: The Firewood Collector
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A young human has gone alone into the woods outside his village to gather firewood. The woods are reportedly safe, but one can never know what truly lies within.
Here is my next Allara story, once again some more absorption goodness.
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Posted by IddlerItaler 3 months ago Report
Nice story. Fantasy setting with some non-fatal focus sounds right up my alley. Admittedly, it almost sounds like Andrei got sent to slimegirl heaven, but I'm happy either way. And possessive preds + unwilling to willing is a scenario I enjoy.
I found a typo: "Andrei turned to " (I guess you meant to delete that.) There are some more scattered here and there like stray spaces but overall it was pretty readable and I imagine you'll get the hang of it.
Posted by SentheWanderer 3 months ago Report
Glad you enjoyed. As for slime girl heaven, well that comes for Andrei later, with his soul boynd to hers and all.
Thanks for pointing out the mistakes. I really need to make a habit of proofreading better.
Posted by IddlerItaler 3 months ago Report
You could look for a spellcheck. Some writing apps have it in-built.
Posted by Orion23 3 months ago Report
This some MGE type shit love it
Posted by SentheWanderer 3 months ago Report
Yeah not gonna lie I definitely took a little bit of inspiration from MGE for Allara. Its main inspiration is D&D (just a little bit more horny).